I'm disappointed that the series is over, but looking forward to the novellas. The author is a fan of L. Frank Baum's The Wizard of Oz and it shows. She references his characters while imagining her own personalities for them. Fast paced with modern, sassy characters.
Oops! The author made a booboo! Two pages prior, the MC thinks of how she has to fight "Dorothy and her super-scary fiance." I thought i must've missed something because I couldn't think of how she had found out. Then this ^
What are some of your pet peeves in writing?