pickBordering on a pick/so-so for me. I loved Carlotta, she was an amazing MC. Full of humour to cover the awful life she‘s had in prison. And there was some laugh out loud thinking from Carlotta.
It was the writing that moves it down a bit for me. The dialect was fine- you got into the rhythm- though there were very long passages. The switches between 1st and 3rd person irritated me so much and ruined the flow. Just stick with Carlotta!
TrishB #booked2023 #bookwithatransperson 13mo
Cinfhen I did audio and I think that REALLY ELEVATED my experience 13mo
TrishB @Cinfhen I think this is one of the few times I was thinking audio would work so much better here 👍🏻 the constant internal dialogue probably sounded brilliant. 13mo
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Cinfhen @TrishB 💯🤗 13mo
Ruthiella I bought this in hard copy on a whim and am looking forward to reading it. But I‘ll keep your critique in mind. Sometimes knowing that stuff going in helps me. 13mo
BkClubCare Audio!! So good. At least try a sample 😃 13mo
carolcharityhome Hi 13mo
TrishB @Ruthiella I think@it does help 👍🏻 13mo
Cinfhen Look what Trish wrote @BarbaraBB 12mo
BarbaraBB @Cinfhen Yes! Trish describes exactly what I‘m struggling with but I will stick with it! Thanks 🩵 12mo
Cinfhen I had a feeling that might be how you were feeling @barbarabb good luck 🍀 12mo
TrishB @BarbaraBB @Cinfhen I nearly gave up a couple of times! 12mo
BarbaraBB I am a 100 pages in and still not really drawn in 🤷🏻♀️ 12mo
TrishB @BarbaraBB you know how I feel about bailing 😁 12mo
BarbaraBB I just did 🤣 12mo
TrishB @BarbaraBB 👍🏻 too many books too little time! 12mo
BarbaraBB Exactly, this one just frustrated me! 12mo
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