

There were a lot of good ideas here, but they weren't executed in the best way. The atmosphere was all over the place, a lot of what happened lacked focus where it mattered. MC's interest in the FLI could have been more developed, as it mostly felt superficial (random crush that haunted the narrative)
I was hoping for more horror but all I got was 3 kind of weird things happening. The ending felt weak.
The relationship between the two women felt repetitive, as one of them was repeatedly obnoxious, cruel and mean to literally everyone in MCs life.
The ending felt underwhelming as there was little buildup to the “big reveal“ 3w