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TEN LITTLE ASTRONAUTS.
TEN LITTLE ASTRONAUTS. | DAMON L. WAKES
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CJRwriting
TEN LITTLE ASTRONAUTS. | DAMON L. WAKES
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Mehso-so

The story has a lot of legs but doesn't really pay off in a satisfying way. I loved the concept, but there was so much more that could have been done with it. Also, the amount of adverbs hurt to read.

The writer clearly has talent though.

Bonus Wendell the rat in the photo for your kind consideration!

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Creadnorthey
Ten Little Astronauts | DAMON L. WAKES
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Mehso-so

Top marks for the inventive way this is published- crowd sourcing the ideas to be written. But the Agatha Christie rewrite misses the fundamental guilt that underlies the original and thus this is really a completely different story. But unfortunately not such a good one. The included short story is worthy of the genre, but thin character development holds it back.

CJRwriting Late to your review, but couldn't agree more. Great idea, not great execution. 2y
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