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How was my book? A hot mess, that's how! It reads like a first draft: verbosity; confusing metaphors; deplorable grammar; inaccurate punctuation; a digression towards the end into instructions for doing the Buddhist tonglen practice ... And the "friendly" tone just came across as over-familiar and therefore creepy.
There were some thought-provoking (and suitably uncomfortable) journalling questions. I'll leave it at that.
rockpools 😬 I might pass… 1y
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