AmyG Great quote. 3y
wanderinglynn Great quote! 3y
Alwaysbeenaloverofbooks True!! 🌹 3y
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*Warning- explicit/graphic sexual scenes bordering into erotica. Book description did not prepare me for that.
This is an imaginative story, and would be great fleshed out into a full novel. Another proofing would not be amiss. Several spelling/grammar errors. Many times, the writing came across as somewhat stilted or clunky, especially with the dialogue. That did, often, break me out of my reader zone, though it was not hard to get back in.