Bitter Fruits | 
panThe total lack of subtlety is almost painful. The writing style is not particularly good. The author should follow the advice “show, don‘t tell”. Most of the time, I could not feel the characters‘ emotions nor their logic. The intimate moments are average and happen in the weirdest locations or at the worst times. I enjoyed the biblical elements woven into the story, but much more could have been done with the myths involved.
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